Brock's RareCandy--Ep2--pg1

Now that I have all the pages scanned, I'm re-submitting them so they can be in order, in my gallery. Fans like things made easy for them, and so do I, so that's why I'm resubmitting...besides that I have an organization OCD of my things.

Previous Info:
What they're saying:
1st panel: Brock is whistling "Pokemon! gotta Feed 'em all!"

2nd Panel: He thinks: "This new recipe is specially designed to promote healthy Bone structure, smooth, healthy skin, and promotes a nice, over-all healthy growth! A healthy Pokemon is a happy pokemon! ...I wonder where Mudkip and Pikachu went..."

3rd Panel: May (exited): "Psst! hey Misty! Brock just made a new recipe! Wanna try it?!"
Misty: "Sure! I wonder what it'll taste like this time..."

4th Panel: Misty: "He really out-did himself this time! It's really good!"
May: "Mmmhmm!" (agreeing)

You can already see a lil BE happening in the 4th panel!

commissioned me to try a comic strip for misty, may, and jessie. It was originally supposed to be a 5-panal, 1 page comic, but I got all inspired, and it's now going to be on atleast 3 pages, with the final panal taking up the 3rd page. We'll see how it goes though xD!

and with this now submitted, I think it's time to change my rules a slight...I'll be allowing commissions for simple comic strips, in the near future, as soon as I get this one done!

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Misty, May, and Brock (c) Pokemon Inc.

PS. let me know if you see any changes needed to be made!